(dle people, keep Rasmus CC'ed as I assume he's not subscribed) Quoting Rasmus Bøg Hansen (moffe@zz9.dk): > Hi > > As english is not my native language, I'd really appreciate if anyone > could do a quick proof reading of my package descriptions for sigit > and ipp2p: > > sigit: > > Description: A small utility to change signatures randomly utility to change mail signatures randomly Rationale: -no article as recommended by best packaging practices -mention that signatures are mail signatures > This small utility changes signatures in random order. > It is compatible with all email and news > clients that use $HOME/.signature although the > signature file can be called anything. It works over > NFS and can even handle multiple signature files. "can be called anything" sounds incorrect to me. Let's have native speakers reformulate as my own rewrite would probably be too Frenglish > . > The utility to manipulate signature databases, > sigitdb, is also included. Tha package also includes a utility aimed at databases handling, calles sigitdb. > . > Homepage: http://www.redhead.dk/ Should be hard-formatted: . Homepage: http://www.redhead.dk/ > > ipp2p: > > Description: An extension to netfilter that recognizes P2P (iptables extension) netfilter extension compatible with peer-to-peer traffic > IPP2P is a netfilter module that recognizes peer-to-peer (P2P) > traffic. P2P raffic can be prioritized low or even blocked to traffic P2P traffic can be either blocked or assigned with a low priority to ensure.... > ensure a shared internet link does not get overloaded with > P2P traffic. > . > This package contains the iptables extension for IPP2P. You > will need a kernel module compiled from the ipp2p-source > package too. > > ipp2p-source: > > Description: An extension to netfilter that recognizes P2P traffic (kernel source) See above > IPP2P is a netfilter module that recognizes peer-to-peer (P2P) > traffic. P2P raffic can be prioritized low or even blocked to > ensure a shared internet link does not get overloaded with > P2P traffic. See above > ipp2p-modules-_KVERS_: > > Description: IPP2P is an extension to netfilter that recognizes P2P traffic (kernel module) See above..:) > IPP2P is a netfilter module that recognizes peer-to-peer (P2P) > traffic. P2P raffic can be prioritized low or even blocked to > ensure a shared internet link does not get overloaded with > P2P traffic. See above..:) > . > This package contains the compiled kernel modules for _KVERS_. > > TIA! Thanks for taking care to have your packages' descriptions reviewed.
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