On Wed, May 02, 2007 at 07:58:01AM +0200, Christian Perrier wrote......
> This is the last call for comments for the review of debconf
> templates for webcalendar.
Below please find a few comments ...
> Template: webcalendar/conf/use_http_auth
> Type: boolean
> Default: false
> _Description: Use HTTP authentication?
> WebCalendar by default uses the database's webcal_user table for
> authenticating users. You can use HTTP authentication logins
> instead and use Apache to manage logins. This will still require adding
> the users to WebCalendar.
- the users to WebCalendar.
+ users to WebCalendar.
I think this sounds better without the 'the'. If you use 'the', it
seems to indicate an already known or established group of users.
> Template: webcalendar/note/admin_user
> Type: note
> _Description: Password change needed for the WebCalendar administrative user
> After installing the tables for the SQL database you will have access
> to WebCalendar using the standard administrative user. It is strongly
> suggested that you change the password after logging in.
> .
> The default login and password are 'admin:admin'.
- to WebCalendar using the standard administrative user. It is strongly
+ to WebCalendar using the WebCalendar administrative user. It is strongly
'standard administrative user' sounds too much like the root
administrative user for the DB. I can see some less experienced
users getting these mixed up.
> Template: webcalendar/conf/httpd_conf
> Type: multiselect
> _Choices: apache2, apache, apache-ssl, apache-perl, other
> Default: apache2
> _Description: Web server to configure:
> Apache can be automatically configured to use WebCalendar by creating links in
> /etc/{apache-version}/conf.d/. Select all the versions of Apache you would
> like to automatically configure or 'other' if you don't use Apache or plan on
> configuring Apache yourself.
- like to automatically configure or 'other' if you don't use Apache or plan on
- configuring Apache yourself.
+ like to automatically configure or 'other' if you don't use Apache or plan to
+ configure Apache yourself.
This could be said several different ways. This is just one way.
Kevin
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