Christian Perrier wrote:
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In unified-diff format:
--- templates~ 2007-04-02 23:24:49.000000000 +0100
+++ templates 2007-04-02 23:25:47.000000000 +0100
@@ -47,8 +47,8 @@
_Description: Name of the database superuser:
The superuser name is required so this script can connect to your database
and add users, databases and tables. This user needs administrator
- privledges on the database. It is most often not the superuser for the
- Unix account (eg root).
+ privileges on the database. It is most often not the Unix superuser account
+ (ie root).
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
_Description: Username for your database:
What username will access the database for mnogosearch? By default this
- it's own user "mnogosearch" so that permissions can be tightened down.
+ its own user "mnogosearch" so that permissions can be tightened down.
1) s/privledges/privileges/ - a simple spelling error.
2) the reference to "the superuser for the Unix account" seems
confused; what's intended is something like "the superuser
account for the Unixlike system", or more straightforwardly,
"the Unix superuser account".
3) s/eg/ie/ - it isn't "the superuser, such as for example (Exempli
Gratia) root", it's "the superuser, that is (Id Est) root".
4) s/it's/its/ - the possessive pronoun, not the contraction.
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