Re: Debconf rewrite project: review the bug-report.txt mail
On Thu, Mar 15, 2007 at 06:23:39AM +0100, Christian Perrier wrote:
> Quoting Christian Perrier (bubulle@debian.org):
> > Please find attached to this mail the fourth mail that will be used in
>
>
> Now really..:-)
Diff attached.
Dominic.
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Dominic Hargreaves | http://www.larted.org.uk/~dom/
PGP key 5178E2A5 from the.earth.li (keyserver,web,email)
--- /tmp/bug-report.txt 2007-03-16 12:49:00.000000000 +0000
+++ /tmp/bug-report.txt.new 2007-03-16 12:52:57.000000000 +0000
@@ -1,20 +1,20 @@
Dear Debian maintainer,
-On <DAYINTENT>, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a review
-action on debconf templates for <PACKAGE>.
+On <DAYINTENT>, I notified you of the beginning of a review process
+concerning debconf templates for <PACKAGE>.
-The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates
-and the proposed modified file(s) is(are) attached to this bug report.
+The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
+and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.
-In case no change is needed, this bug is a fake bug report that will
+If no change is needed, this bug is a fake bug report that will
collect translation updates (see below).
-If changes are suggested, please review the rewritten templates and
-object to the suggested changes in the next 3 days.
+If changes are suggested, please review them, and if you have any
+objections, let me know in the next 3 days.
Please try to avoid uploading <PACKAGE> with these changes right now.
-The second phase of this action will begin as of <DAY03> and I will
+The second phase of this process will begin on <DAY03>, when I will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.
The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.
-Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent to
+Both these calls for translations will request that updates are sent to
this bug report.
The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
course, other changes are safe.
On <DAY16>, I will contact you again and will send a final patch
-summarizing all the updates (both changes to debconf templates,
+summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).
Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.
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