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Re: Geneweb package debconf templates



On Wed, Mar 19, 2003 at 07:34:04AM +0100, Christian Perrier wrote:
> I have a few debconf templates in the package for geneweb (a web-based
> genealogy program) which I maintain in the official Debian distribution.
> 
> Not being a native english speaker (this mail is a proof, isn't it?) ,
> these templates may have some mistakes/errors/whatever......

> Please make only important corrections if that's possible, as I have
[...]

I've included some diffs below.

Sorry, I made some corrections other than just plain grammar.
It was sometimes hard to work out the context of the messages which made
it quite difficult to provide good corrections.

Also, others may disagree but I think you ask too many questions and
give too many notes. Is it important that the user know all about the
files being moved? Do people often change the port number?


Hamish


--- templates.pot	2003-03-19 20:42:35.000000000 +1100
+++ templates.pot.hm	2003-03-19 20:55:14.000000000 +1100
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
 
 #. Description
 #: ../geneweb.templates:5
-msgid "Other languages will however remains available."
+msgid "Other languages will still be available."
 msgstr ""
 
 #. Description
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
 
 #. Description
 #: ../geneweb.templates:15
-msgid "The port listened by the geneweb daemon may be configured here."
+msgid "The port used by the geneweb daemon (gwd) for incoming connections may be configured here."
 msgstr ""
 
 #. Description
@@ -96,15 +96,15 @@
 #. Description
 #: ../geneweb.templates:26
 msgid ""
-"The Geneweb daemon gwd can be launched automatically at startup or manually "
-"by the system administrator or any user when it is needed. This choice "
-"allows you to prevent automatic start of gwd, for instance if you prefer "
-"using it as a CGI program."
+"The Geneweb daemon gwd can be launched automatically at startup, manually "
+"by the system administrator, or by any user when it is needed. This choice "
+"allows you to prevent automatic start of gwd, for example if you prefer "
+"to run it as a CGI program."
 msgstr ""
 
 #. Description
 #: ../geneweb.templates:34
-msgid "Old directory /var/geneweb not erased."
+msgid "Old directory /var/geneweb not removed."
 msgstr ""
 
 #. Description
@@ -117,17 +117,17 @@
 #. Description
 #: ../geneweb.templates:34
 msgid ""
-"It has been detected that such directory was used on your system. Some files "
-"have been moved from there to /var/lib/geneweb but installation scripts "
-"found files they are not aware of in /var/geneweb."
+"It has been detected that this directory was used on your system. Some files "
+"have been moved from there to /var/lib/geneweb but the geneweb installation "
+"script found some unexpected files in /var/geneweb."
 msgstr ""
 
 #. Description
 #: ../geneweb.templates:34
 msgid ""
 "Thus the directory has been left intact. It is highly recommended that you "
-"check for files there and move them in /var/lib/geneweb and then remove the /"
-"var/geneweb directory."
+"check the remaining files there and move them to /var/lib/geneweb, then "
+"remove the /var/geneweb directory."
 msgstr ""
 
 #. Description
@@ -151,9 +151,7 @@
 #. Description
 #: ../geneweb.templates:48
 msgid ""
-"The configuration program detected that you had a file named /etc/geneweb/"
-"genewebrc. It has been moved to /etc/default/geneweb and it does not exist "
-"anymore in /etc/geneweb."
+"The congiguration file has been moved and renamed to /etc/default/geneweb."
 msgstr ""
 
 #. Description
@@ -165,22 +163,23 @@
 
 #. Description
 #: ../geneweb.templates:65
-msgid "Should database directory be removed during the purge of geneweb?"
+msgid "Should Geneweb's database directory be removed if the geneweb package "
+"is purged?"
 msgstr ""
 
 #. Description
 #: ../geneweb.templates:65
 msgid ""
-"The database directory (/var/lib/geneweb) will contain the databases served "
-"by the main geneweb daemon (launched at boot). These databases will be put "
-"there by authorized users (members of the \"geneweb\" group)."
+"Geneweb's databases will be stored in the database directory "
+"/var/lib/geneweb. These databases may be put there by authorized users "
+"who must be members of the \"geneweb\" group."
 msgstr ""
 
 #. Description
 #: ../geneweb.templates:65
 msgid ""
 "Please chose whether you want to remove databases automatically when purging "
-"the package (completely removing it) by running `dpkg --purge geneweb'."
+"the package (completely removing it)."
 msgstr ""
 
 #. Description
@@ -220,7 +219,7 @@
 #. Description
 #: ../geneweb.templates:83
 msgid ""
-"The location for these files is now moved to /usr/share/geneweb/etc and /usr/"
+"These files have been moved to /usr/share/geneweb/etc and /usr/"
 "share/geneweb/lang."
 msgstr ""
 
-- 
Hamish Moffatt VK3SB <hamish@debian.org> <hamish@cloud.net.au>



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