Re: Help in proof-reading
On Mon, Oct 28, 2002 at 10:40:30AM -0200, Gustavo Noronha Silva wrote:
> My friend Luca Monducci, who translated apt-howto into italian has
> written a section for apt-get clean and apt-get autoclean, I would
> appreciate if someone would proof-read the section... here's
> the link:
In addition to the other subthread, I'd do this:
--- clean.sgml.orig 2002-10-28 15:35:26.000000000 +0000
+++ clean.sgml 2002-10-28 15:38:22.000000000 +0000
@@ -5,11 +5,11 @@
(<file>/var/cache/apt/archives/</file>), and then proceed with
installation, see <ref id="install">.
-In long time the local repository could grow and occupy a lot of disk space.
-Fortunately APT provides tools for manage its local repository:
+In time the local repository can grow and occupy a lot of disk space.
+Fortunately, APT provides tools for managing its local repository:
<prgn>apt-get</prgn>'s <tt>clean</tt> and <tt>autoclean</tt> methods.
-<prgn>apt-get clean</prgn> removes every files but lock files from
+<prgn>apt-get clean</prgn> removes everything except lock files from
<file>/var/cache/apt/archives/partial/</file>. Thus, if you need to
reinstall a package APT should retrieve it again.
Colin Watson [email@example.com]