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Re: Help in proof-reading

On Mon, 2002-10-28 at 07:40, Gustavo Noronha Silva wrote:
> Hello friends, 
> My friend Luca Monducci, who translated apt-howto into italian has
> written a section for apt-get clean and apt-get autoclean, I would
> appreciate if someone would proof-read the section... here's
> the link:
> http://people.debian.org/~kov/apt-howto/clean.sgml.gz

I gave it a quick once-over, my suggestions are attached as a patch.

--- -	2002-10-28 09:43:10.000000000 -0500
+++ /tmp/clean.sgml.new	2002-10-28 09:42:35.000000000 -0500
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 <sect id="clean">Removing unused package files: apt-get clean and autoclean
 When you install a package APT retrieves from the hosts listed in
-/etc/sources.list the needed files, store it in a local repository
-(<file>/var/cache/apt/archives/</file>), and then proceed with
+/etc/sources.list the needed files, stores it in a local repository
+(<file>/var/cache/apt/archives/</file>), and then proceeds with
 installation, see <ref id="install">.
 In long time the local repository could grow and occupy a lot of disk space.
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 gpm/stable upgradeable from 1.19.6-11 to 1.19.6-12
-<prgn>apt-show-versions</prgn> show that
+<prgn>apt-show-versions</prgn> shows that
 <file>logrotate_3.5.9-8_i386.deb</file> provides the up to date version
 of <package>logrotate</package>, so
 <file>logrotate_3.5.9-7_i386.deb</file> is useless. Also
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 Del logrotate 3.5.9-7 [26.5kB]
-Finally <tt>apt-get autoclean</tt> removes only the old files.
+Finally, <tt>apt-get autoclean</tt> removes only the old files.
 See <ref id="apt-show-versions"> for more information on

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