Re: DPN 10/2012 frozen. Please review and translate
On 2012-05-12 08:25, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
Hi,
we finished the last bits of the Debian Project News issue to be
released
on Monday: we'd really appreciate reviews and translations.
Patch attached because I'm away from my key; only a couple of minor
corrections.
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Jonathan Wiltshire jmw@debian.org
Debian Developer http://people.debian.org/~jmw
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@@ -66,9 +66,9 @@
<p>Raphael Geissert wrote a blog post about the
<a href="http://rgeissert.blogspot.it/2012/04/ever-growing-mirrors-network.html";>constant
growth of Debian's mirrors network</a>. The total number of mirrors is
-currently 330 for the HTTP protocol and 300 for FTP.
-The mirrors are distributed across 73 countries, thanks to Debian's
-sponsors who host them.
+currently 330 for HTTP and 300 for FTP.
+The mirrors are distributed across 73 countries, thanks to the Debian
+sponsors hosting them.
</p>
<toc-add-entry name="DPLbits">Bits from the DPL</toc-add-entry>
@@ -76,8 +76,8 @@
<p>
Stefano Zacchiroli sent
<a href="https://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2012/05/msg00001.html";>his
-monthly report</a> on DPL activities. During April, Stefano spent time
-mostly trying to reach consensus on various topics: the
+monthly report</a> on DPL activities. During April, Stefano mostly spent time
+trying to reach consensus on various topics: the
<a href="https://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2012/03/msg00048.html";>proposal
for a diversity statement for the Debian Project</a>, the
<a href="https://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2012/04/msg00101.html";>revenue
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