Re: Advice on template wording
Damyan Ivanov <dam@modsoftsys.com> wrote:
> Related to Jens' message[1], please advice on the English wording of the
Please try debian-l10n-english first.
> ========= new installs, normal priority =========
> Template: firebird2/sysdba_password
> Type: password
> _Description: Password for SYSDBA:
> Firebird has a special user, named SYSDBA, which is the user that has
s/user, named SYSDBA/user named SYSDBA/ ;# matter of opinion
> access to all databases. SYSDBA can also create new databases and
> users. Because of this, it is necessary to secure SYSDBA user using a
s/secure SYSDBA user using/secure SYSDBA with/
> password.
> .
> The password is stored in /etc/firebird2/SYSDBA.password (readable only
> by root). You may modify it there (don't forget to update also the
> security database using gsec utility), or you may use dpkg-reconfigure
s/update also the/update the/
s/security database/security database too/
s/ using gsec utility/, using the gsec utility/
> to update both.
> .
> If you don't enter a password, a random one will be used (and stored
> in SYSDBA.password).
> ========= low priority note on upgrades from pre-12 package ==========
> Template: firebird2/new_sysdba_password_note
> Type: note
> _Description: Password for SYSDBA is handled via debconf
s/Password for SYSDBA/The SYSDBA password/ ;# debatable
s/handled/managed/ ;# debatable
s/via/with/ ;# English is better than Latin IMO
> Since version 1.5.3.4780-12 firebird server packages use debconf to
s/4780-12 /4780-12, / ;# maybe less of a matter of opinion?
> manage SYSDBA password.
s/manage SYSDBA password/manage the SYSDBA password/
> .
> The password is stored in /etc/firebird2/SYSDBA.password (readable only
> by root) as before. You may modify it there (don't forget to update
> also the security database (using gsec utility), or you may use
s/also the security database/the security database too/
s/ (using gsec utility/, using the gsec utility/ ;# stop unmatched ()s
> dpkg-reconfigure to update both.
> ======== -12 and up re-configures or upgrades, low priority =======
> Template: firebird2/new_sysdba_password
> Type: password
> _Description: Password for SYSDBA:
> Please enter new password for firebird's SYSDBA user.
s/Please enter new password/Please enter a new password/
> .
> The password is stored in /etc/firebird2/SYSDBA.password (readable only
> by root). You may modify it there (don't forget to update also the
> security database (using gsec utility), or you may use dpkg-reconfigure
> to update both.
s/also the/the/
s/security database (/security database too, /
s/using gsec utility/using the gsec utility/
> .
> To keep your existing password, leave this blank.
> ========================================================================
Regards,
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