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Re: Asking for help profreading this debconf6 article

Dear Knut, dear list,

this report looks promising. Alas, I won't find the time to proof read 
it right now, nor am I a native speaker. However I'll start with the 
1st section in order to "stub" people to go on.

> The Norwegian Ministry of Education and Research has founded a report
> about free software in schools. It covers planing or deployment of

"planning" is spelled with two Ns I think...

> Skolelinux/DebianEdu that affects 234 schools, 33.000 client

English uses a comma to separate thousands (33,000)

> machines, and 101.000 pupils and teachers. The focus is on technical
> issues, economy and organisation. There is also some feedback on how
> the teachers uses free software in their teaching.

Sugg.: ...how teachers use.

The PDF is 400 kB only, volunteers will find 13 pages of interesting 
reading (including several tables and diagrams). If this was plain 
text, a wiki page could simplify shared proof reading.

Happy easter to all of you.

Am Mittwoch 12 April 2006 05:41 schrieb Knut Yrvin:
> Looking for someone that could proofread this article?
> OpenDoc:
> http://developer.skolelinux.no/artikler/2006-04-02-debconf6.odt
> Pdf:
> http://developer.skolelinux.no/~knuty/2006-04-02-debconf6.pdf
> Thanks
> Knut Yrvin

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