n Thursday 12 August 2004 19:31, Jonas Smedegaard wrote:
> On 12-08-2004 18:55, Klaus Ade Johnstad wrote:
> | torsdag 12. august 2004, 18:44, skrev Knut Yrvin:
> |>>What about:
> |>>"Running a Skolelinux/Debian Edu network" or
> |>>"Run and maintain s Skolelinux network"?
> |>>
> |>>What do you think?
> |>>
> |>>- Knut
> |
> | Both is better than the present, could someone fluent in English
> | comment which is the better?
>
> Hmm - I believe "run" is what the machines (hopefully) does, and
> "maintain" is what we do to keep them running. So "run and maintain"
> could be confused with "run around and maintain" while the former is
> almost correct.
"run and maintain ..." doesn't really flow in my opinion.
> I suggest the term "Maintaining a Skolelinux/Debian-Edu network".
>
> The added dash to avoid misinterpreting it as a combination of
> "Skolelinux Edu" and "Debian Edu" (which is wrong AFAIK).
I was gonna suggest this to :-).
One problem I have with these titles is that this manual also has a large
part about installing Skolelinux, and these title's don't reflect that...
maybe we should split the manual into two parts:
1. Installing a skolelinux network
-> the one-time stuff you do when first installing the network
2. Maintaining a skolelinux network
-> everything concerning day-to-day (or other cyclic) maintenance tasks
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Coördinator Belgisch Skolelinux team
Coördinator Nederlandse Skolelinux vertaling
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