Bug#781706: release-notes: proofreading for moreinfo.diff
Package: release-notes
Severity: minor
Tags: patch
The only changes here are extra Harvard commas, which makes me wonder
if we'd previously standardised on not using them.
Oh, and I notice the word "email", which I've left spelled with a
hyphen in issues.dbk.
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
--- moreinfo.dbk.pristine 2015-04-01 19:00:01.309706731 +0100
+++ moreinfo.dbk 2015-04-01 21:17:29.148647361 +0100
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
&debian; is available from the Debian Documentation Project (DDP),
whose goal is to create high-quality documentation for Debian users and
developers. Available documentation includes the Debian Reference, Debian New
-Maintainers Guide, the Debian FAQ and many more. For full
+Maintainers Guide, the Debian FAQ, and many more. For full
details of the existing resources see the <ulink
url="&url-ddp;">Debian Documentation website</ulink> and the
<ulink url="&url-wiki;">Debian Wiki website</ulink>
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
<para>
Documentation for individual packages is installed into
<filename>/usr/share/doc/<replaceable>package</replaceable></filename>. This
-may include copyright information, Debian specific details and any upstream
+may include copyright information, Debian specific details, and any upstream
documentation.
</para>
</section>
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
<section id="gethelp">
<title>Getting help</title>
<para>
-There are many sources of help, advice and support for Debian users, but these
+There are many sources of help, advice, and support for Debian users, but these
should only be considered if research into documentation of the issue has
exhausted all sources. This section provides a short introduction to these sources
which may be helpful for new Debian users.
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
</para>
<para>
In any case, if you are working in the free software community in any way, as a
-user, programmer, writer or translator you are already helping the free
+user, programmer, writer, or translator you are already helping the free
software effort. Contributing is rewarding and fun, and as well as allowing
you to meet new people it gives you that warm fuzzy feeling inside.
</para>
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