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Bug#617466: marked as done (release-notes: Instructions do not restart script after reboot.)



> Date: Sat, 12 Mar 2011 23:40:02 +0100
> From: Javier Fernández-Sanguino Peña <jfs@computer.org>
> To: "Karl O. Pinc" <kop@meme.com>, 617466-close@bugs.debian.org
> Subject: Re: Bug#617466: release-notes: Instructions do not restart script
>  after reboot.
> Sender: Javier Fernandez-Sanguino <javifs@gmail.com>
> Mail-Followup-To: "Karl O. Pinc" <kop@meme.com>,
>  617466-close@bugs.debian.org
> User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.20 (2009-06-14)
> 
> On Tue, Mar 08, 2011 at 11:23:34PM -0600, Karl O. Pinc wrote:
> > I see no instructions in the squeeze release notes that say to restart
> > 'script' after reboot, so the script only records the "first half" of
> > the upgrade.
> 
> Thank you.  I have added a footnote to the text to indicate this. It is
> now in the SVN revision 8554 of the release notes.

Hi Javier,

May I suggest the attached small patch to your footnote?

Kind regards,
Andrei
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diff --git a/trunk/release-notes/en/upgrading.dbk b/trunk/release-notes/en/upgrading.dbk
index d634011..1b775fa 100644
--- a/trunk/release-notes/en/upgrading.dbk
+++ b/trunk/release-notes/en/upgrading.dbk
@@ -944,8 +944,8 @@ work due to the preinst checks introduced by the maintainer -->
 <para>
 You should reboot the system 
 <footnote><para>If you are logging the upgrade as described in
-<xref linkend="upgradingpackages"/>, please, use again <command>script</command> to
-log the next steps of the upgrade after the reboot in order to log the
+<xref linkend="upgradingpackages"/>, please use <command>script</command> again to
+log the next steps of the upgrade after the reboot, in order to log the complete
 result of the actions described in <xref linkend="upgrading-full"/>.
 </para></footnote>
 once you have upgraded both the kernel and  <systemitem role="package">udev</systemitem>.

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