minor release-notes patch

[Joey Hess <joeyh@debian.org>]

Improves some wording and reorders a script command to better match the
scriptreplay command.

-- 
see shy jo

--- release-notes.en.sgml.old	2007-04-01 18:22:30.000000000 -0400
+++ release-notes.en.sgml	2007-04-01 18:30:22.000000000 -0400
@@ -922,7 +922,7 @@
 # aptitude unmarkauto $(dpkg-query -W 'kernel-image-2.6*' | cut -f1)
 </example></p>
 
-        <p>Note: You can review which packages are marked as <em/auto/ in aptitude running:
+        <p>Note: You can review which packages are marked as <em/auto/ in aptitude by running:
 
 <example>
 # aptitude search 'i~M &lt;package name&gt;'
@@ -1107,7 +1107,7 @@
 	  report. To start the recording, type:
 
           <example>
-# script -t -a ~/upgrade-&releasename;.script 2>~/upgrade-&releasename;.time
+# script -t 2>~/upgrade-&releasename;.time -a ~/upgrade-&releasename;.script
           </example>
 
 	  or similar. Do not put the typescript file in a temporary
@@ -1254,8 +1254,8 @@
           </example>
         </p>
 
-        <p>This will upgrade a number of packages, include <package/base-files/,
-        <package/console-common/, and <package/debconf/. You will be asked information
+        <p>This will upgrade a number of packages, including <package/base-files/,
+        <package/console-common/, and <package/debconf/. You will be asked questions
         about your console keymap as well as the default level and frontend for
         package configuration questions.</p>

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