Package: release-notes Version: NUMBER Severity: wishlist Tags: l10n, patchWhile creating my translation of the Etch release-notes I have encountered the following typos, which I thought you might like to fix before the next release.
___ 1. po:33 Translator: ③ type: <p></p>Original: ⌘0 The <em>debian-volatile</em> service that was introduced as an unofficial
service with the release of &oldreleasename, has now become an official Debian service. - &oldreleasename, + &oldreleasename;, 2. .po:54 Translator: ③ type: <p></p>Original: ⌘0 It's wise to inform all users in advance of any upgrades you're planning,
although users accessing your system via an <prgn>ssh</prgn> connection should notice little during the upgrade, and shold be able to continueworking. If you wish to take extra precautions, back up or unmount users' partitions (<file>/home</file>) before upgrading. A reboot will not normally
be necessary, unless you plan to also upgrade your kernel. - shold + should - unless you plan to also upgrade your kernel. + unless you also plan to upgrade your kernel. 3. po:112 Translator: ③ type: <p></p>Original: ⌘0 The recommended tool for upgrading between &debian; releases is to use the
package management tool <prgn>aptitude</prgn>. This tool makes safer decisions about package installations than running <prgn>apt-get</prgn> directly. Too many "tool"s in this para. I suggest: +The recommended way to upgrade from previous &debian; releases is to use the
package management tool <prgn>aptitude</prgn>. This program makes safer decisions about package installations than running <prgn>apt-get</prgn> directly. 4. .po:139 Translator: ③ type: <p></p>Original: ⌘0 New versions of currently installed packages that cannot be upgraded without changing the install status of another package will be left at their current version (displayed as \"held back\"). This can be resolved by either using <prgn>aptitude</prgn> to choose these packages for installation or by trying
<tt>aptitude -f install <var>package</var></tt>. - <var>package</var> + <var>package_name</var>In other strings, you use "package_name", which is clearer for users to understand:
po:76 Translator: ③ type: <example></example> Original: ⌘0 # aptitude hold <var>package_name</var> po:149 Translator: ③ type: <example></example> Original: ⌘0 # dpkg --remove <var>package_name</var> .po:157 Translator: ③ type: <example></example> Original: ⌘0 # dpkg -r --force-depends <var>package_name</var> so I make this suggestion. This also applies to: po:219 Translator: ③ type: <p></p> Original: ⌘0 Documentation for individual packages is installed into<file>/usr/share/doc/<var>package</var></file>, this may include copyright
information, Debian specific details and any upstream documentation. 5. po:175 Translator: ③ type: <p><example>Original: ⌘0 As mentioned above, in many cases <prgn>mdadm</prgn> can work without configuration file. If you use a kernel that automatically configures the
RAID array for you, can skip this paragraph — you merely have toinstall the package <package>mdadm</package> and the RAID will be detected during the boot process. The standard kernels in Debian have support for the configuration of RAID arrays on boot. You also need to make sure that the partitions are set to type \"Linux raid autodetect\" (id <tt>fd</ tt>). The
following command will list the current type of partitions: - without configuration file. + without a configuration file.- If you use a kernel that automatically configures the RAID array for you, can skip this paragraph + If you use a kernel that automatically configures the RAID array for you, you can skip this paragraph
- have support for + support 6. po:218 Translator: ③ type: <p></p>Original: ⌘0 Beyond these release notes and the installation guide further documentation on &debian; is available from the Debian Documentation Project (DDP), whose
goal is to create high quality documentation for Debian users anddevelopers. Documentation including the Debian Guide, Debian New Maintainers Guide, and Debian FAQ are available, and many more. For full details of the
resources available see the <url id=\"&url-ddp;\" name=\"DDP website\">.- Beyond these release notes and the installation guide further documentation + Beyond these release notes and the installation guide, further documentation
- high quality documentation + high-quality documentation - Documentation including the Debian Guide, Debian New Maintainers Guide, and Debian FAQ are available, and many more.+ There are a great many documents available, including the Debian Guide, the Debian New Maintainers' Guide, and the Debian FAQs.
- For full details of the resources available see
+ For full details of the current resources, see
("available" has already been used in the previous sentence).
7.
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Translator: ③ type: <p></p>
Original: ⌘0 Debian has an IRC channel dedicated to the support and
aid of Debian users
located on the OFTC IRC network which exists to provide interactive
services
to peer-directed project communities. To access the channel point your favourite IRC client at &debian-irc-server; and join #debian.- Debian has an IRC channel dedicated to the support and aid of Debian users located on the OFTC IRC network which exists to provide interactive services
to peer-directed project communities.+ Debian has an IRC channel dedicated to the support and aid of Debian users, located on the OFTC IRC network which exists to provide interactive services
to peer-directed project communities. - To access the channel point + To access the channel, point ___ I hope this is useful.Clytie Siddall (vi-VN, Vietnamese free-software translation team / nhóm Việt hóa phần mềm tự do)
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