Minor Release Notes patch
Hi Rob,
it follows a really minor patch (with comments) against release-notes:
Jens
Index: release-notes.en.sgml
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RCS file: /cvs/debian-doc/ddp/manuals.sgml/release-notes/en/release-notes.en.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -r1.11 release-notes.en.sgml
--- release-notes.en.sgml 6 Jan 2005 22:25:35 -0000 1.11
+++ release-notes.en.sgml 9 Jan 2005 21:01:25 -0000
@@ -53,17 +53,12 @@
</list>
</p>
-<![ %not-i386 [
-
-<!-- i386 doesn't have a port page - or do they now? -->
-
<p>You can read more about port status, and port-specific
information for your architecture at the <url id="&url-ports;"
name="Debian port web pages">.</p>
-
-]]>
i386 has a port page since more than 4 yours. What's wrong with it?
-<![ %hppa %s390 %mips %mipsel %ia64 [
+<!-- FIXME: The next isn't used! -->
+<![ %hppa; %s390; %mips; %mipsel; %ia64; [
Does anyone know how to enable the code for the specified architectures?
"<![ %hppa %s390 %mips %mipsel %ia64 [" includes nothing!
<p>This is only the second official release of &debian; for the
&arch-title; architecture. We feel that it has proven itself
@@ -112,6 +107,7 @@
<p>
<taglist>
+ <!-- Where is bf24 mentioned? -->
<tag>vanilla</tag>
<item><p>The standard kernel package available in Debian. This
includes almost all drivers supported by Linux built as
@@ -181,9 +177,9 @@
/dists/&releasename;/main/disks-&architecture;/current/doc/install.txt
(or .html)
- </example></p>
+ </example>
- <p>or on the Internet at: <url id="&url-install-manual;">.</p>
+ or on the Internet at: <url id="&url-install-manual;">.</p>
<p>The old &debian; installation system called
<prgn>boot-floppies</prgn> has been replaced by a new componentized and
@@ -499,9 +495,9 @@
<example>
- mount /cdrom (this will mount the CD to the mount point)
- ls -alF /cdrom (this should show the CD's root directory)
- umount /cdrom (this will unmount the CD)
+ mount /cdrom # this will mount the CD to the mount point
+ ls -alF /cdrom # this should show the CD's root directory
+ umount /cdrom # this will unmount the CD
</example></p>
@@ -674,7 +670,7 @@
<sect2 id="newkernel"><heading>Upgrading your kernel</heading>
<p>Note that the Linux kernel was <em/not/ upgraded by these
- procedures.You may wish to do so yourself, either by installing one
+ procedures. You may wish to do so yourself, either by installing one
of the <package/kernel-image-*/ packages or by compiling a customized
kernel from sources.</p>
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