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Re: http://ddp.alioth.debian.org is up and let's make CVS working

On 03 Feb 2004 08:49:15 +0200, I posted to debian-doc:
 > On Mon, 2 Feb 2004 23:30:12 +0100, Osamu Aoki <osamu@debian.org> posted to
 > debian-doc:
 >> I will be happy if someone polish this page (Both html style and
 >> English.)
 > Below are some little changes to the English. I did not change the
 > HTML much (I mainly added some <p> tags to appease the W3C validator
 > at <http://validate.w3.org>), nor did I try to add any content of my
 > own. The CVS instructions are changed, though, and I took the liberty
 > to add instructions for anonymous access.

More minor changes in the same vein.

 > I could not find this file in the CVS -- is it there?

I guess not then?

/* era */

--- index.html.orig	Wed Feb  4 01:20:57 2004
+++ index.html	Thu Feb  5 08:07:58 2004
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
    <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=iso-8859-1">
    <meta name="Author" content="Osamu Aoki">
-   <meta name="GENERATOR" content="Vim again">
+   <meta name="GENERATOR" content="Hand made with pride">
    <title>Debian Documentation Project</title>
@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@
 This is a temporary file.  Updates welcome.
@@ -68,29 +69,31 @@
 <li>ddp: all DDP documentation (not active yet)
-Building and updating web page
+Building and updating web pages
 Scripts at Alioth needs to be carefully reviewed for every update 
 and copied to <tt>cvs.debian.org/debian-doc/ddp/</tt> by the DD.
-Web pages building process use script in 
+The web pages building process uses scripts in 
-to keep web autobuilding process secure.   See proposal for how to do 
-this in
+to keep web autobuilding process secure.
+See proposal for how to do  this in
-<li><a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-doc/2004/debian-doc-200402/msg00021.html";>Francesco Proposal</a>
+<li><a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-doc/2004/debian-doc-200402/msg00021.html";>Francesco's Proposal</a>
 <li><a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-doc/2004/debian-doc-200402/msg00043.html";>Osamu's Proposal</a>
-Transitoion plan proposals (How to split DDP source.)
+Transition plan proposals (How to split DDP source)
 <li><a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-doc/2004/debian-doc-200402/msg00008.html";>Javi's Proposal</a>
 <li><a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-doc/2004/debian-doc-200402/msg00043.html";>Osamu's Proposal</a>
-Get started with CVS
+Getting started with CVS
 For translators to get the tree, do this:
  $ <b>cvs -d :ext:user@cvs.ddp.alioth.debian.org:/cvsroot/ddp -z3 co ddp</b>
@@ -163,7 +166,7 @@
 Although the directory name contains "manuals.sgml", these documents
 need not be written in SGML, but they can be XML as well.
-So proposal to change this to "manuals" proposed.
+So we propose to change this to just "manuals".
 HOWTO join DDP at Alioth
formail -s procmail <http://www.iki.fi/era/spam/ >http://www.euro.cauce.org/
cat | more | cat<http://www.iki.fi/era/unix/award.html>http://www.debian.org/

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