Hi! * Christian Perrier <bubulle@debian.org> [080214 06:54]: > > Description : Arcade game featuring tux the penguin, snow ice and fishes > At least uncapitalize "Arcade". "At least"? You have further improvements? Sounds "3D racing game featuring Tux, the Linux penguin" better for you? (Hmm... why did I copy the long description from ppracer, but not the synopsis?) > > You should have working 3D acceleration for your X or this game will run quite > > slow. > I refrain my "neutral wording" stance here which makes me think that > wording with "you should have", "you must", etc. should be dropped in > favor of "<foo> is required".....I guess that contradictors will > object that some "friendly" wording is OK for games. > > However, shouldn't the last word be "slowly"? Now that you mention it... allthough it is in theorie possible to play this game without 3D acceleration, it is practically impossible. How does: "3D acceleration is required or this game will run quite slowly." sound to you? Yours sincerely, Alexander
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