Re: Amendment to the Constitution: Add a new foundation document
On Sun, 2 May 2004 17:59:11 -0400, Daniel Burrows <dburrows@debian.org> said:
>> >> We affirm that whenever a change to the Social Contract, or the
>> >> Constitution, takes place, the activities required to provide
>> >> ongoing and proactive support for the Debian user community
>> >> shall continue. This includes, but is not necessarily limited
>> >> to, providing security updates for previously-released versions
>> >> of Debian, providing point-release updates to
>> >> previously-released versions of Debian, preparing for the next
>> >> (compliant) release of Debian, actually releasing the current
>> >> non-compliant version of Debian if such a release is imminent
>> >> (as well as any further updates to that version of Debian), as
>> >> well as providing all the Project's infrastructure such as
>> >> bug-tracking and mailing lists.
>>
>> > Suggest "and" before the "actually" (comma-separated lists
>> > usually
>> > say "A, B, C, and D"). I guess it isn't there because of "as
>> > well as", but I'd put it there anyway.
>>
>> Doesn't sound right to me when I speak it aloud. I would like some
>> other opinions on this as well.
> I like Thomas' suggestion: "version of Debian), and providing all
> the...".
Done.
manoj
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Beware of a tall black man with one blond shoe.Manoj Srivastava <srivasta@debian.org> <http://www.debian.org/%7Esrivasta/>
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