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Re: Bug#163904: ITP: isakmpd, an implementation of the ISAKMP protocol



thanks :)

On Thu, Oct 10, 2002 at 12:02:03AM -0400, Colin Walters wrote:
> On Wed, 2002-10-09 at 20:40, Jean-Francois Dive wrote:
> > Package: wnpp
> > Severity: wishlist
> > 
> > 	Package name	: isakmpd
> > 	Upstream Author	: openbsd: Niklas Hallqvist,Angelos D. Keromytis,
> > 				   Håkan Olsson
> > 	URL		: www.openbsd.org
> > 	License		: BSD.
> > 	Description	: An implementation of the ISAKMP protocol.
> > 
> > This software provide an implementation of the internet key exchange protocol.
> > The supported ipsec implementation is freeswan KLIPS and USAGI IPsec will nbe
> > added in a near future.
> 
> Hmm.  There are a few typos and grammatical issues here.  I would write
> this as: 
> 
> This software provides an implementation of the internet key exchange
> protocol. The supported IPSec implementation is FreeS/WAN KLIPS (see the
> freeswan package); USAGI IPsec will be added in the near future.
> 
> 
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