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some typo/suggestions for the docs



boot-installer/x86.xml:310-311:
	<informalexample><screen>
	Installer boot menu
the heading is "&debian-gnu; installer boot menu" in stretch installer

boot-installer/arm.xml:93-94:
      The console config is not correctly detected on Juno so just hitting
      return will show no kernel output. Set the console to  
maybe s/return/&enterkey;/?

boot-installer/arm.xml:96:
      as described in (<xref linkend="arm64-console-setup"/>).
using () as such looks strange;
(as ...) works, though

boot-installer/arm.xml:183:246
	follwing
+o

preparing/bios-setup/powerpc.xml:98
    Save the level of the existing firmware before really updating. In
    ASM, in the system menu, click <command>Service Aids ??? Service Processor
    Command Line</command>, and run the following command:
where ??? is right-arrow (multi-byte character is used) in the original;
 should be like "-&gt;"

preparing/bios-setup/powerpc.xml:105
    Download the .img file of the level of firmware to be updated to a
    location in the host filesystem. Refer to IBM Fix Central for downloading
    the image file.
should probably point https://www.ibm.com/support/fixcentral/
 (the string links there in the orig)

-- 
victory
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