Quoting Charles Plessy (plessy@debian.org):
> +Template: network-console/authorized_keys_url
> +Type: string
> +Description: for internal use; can be preseeded
> + What URL contains a list of authorized SSH public keys?
> + The file at the given URL should be of the same form as a standard OpenSSH
> + authorized_keys file.
Even if not very important, I recommend avoiding interrogative form in
the long part.
So, I'd rephrase to:
Template: network-console/authorized_keys_url
Type: string
Description: for internal use; can be preseeded
This variable container the URL that provides a list of authorized
SSH public keys.
> +
> +Template: network-console/authorized_keys_fetch_failure
> +Type: error
> +# should be translated when committed upstream
> +Description: Could not fetch OpenSSH authorized keys
> + An error occurred while fetching OpenSSH authorized keys from ${LOCATION}.
> + .
> + Check /var/log/syslog or see virtual console 4 for the details.
> --
> 1.7.9.5
>
Add a comment for translators and move to sublevel 6
Template: network-console/authorized_keys_fetch_failure
Type: error
# :sl6:
#flag:comment:2
# Translators: do NOT translate the "LOCATION" variable name
Description: Could not fetch OpenSSH authorized keys
An error occurred while fetching OpenSSH authorized keys from ${LOCATION}.
.
Check /var/log/syslog or see virtual console 4 for the details.
>
> Template: network-console/authorized_keys_fetch_failure
> Type: error
> -# should be translated when committed upstream
> -Description: Could not fetch OpenSSH authorized keys
> +# :sl6:
> +_Description: Could not fetch OpenSSH authorized keys
> An error occurred while fetching OpenSSH authorized keys from ${LOCATION}.
> .
> Check /var/log/syslog or see virtual console 4 for the details.
Template: network-console/authorized_keys_fetch_failure
Type: error
# :sl6:
#flag:comment:2
# Translators: do NOT translate the "LOCATION" variable name
_Description: Could not fetch OpenSSH authorized keys
An error occurred while fetching OpenSSH authorized keys from ${LOCATION}.
.
Check /var/log/syslog or see virtual console 4 for the details.
> Template: network-console/authorized_keys_url
> Type: string
> Description: for internal use; can be preseeded
> - What URL contains a list of authorized SSH public keys?
> + URL to a list of authorized SSH public keys.
> .
> - The file at the given URL should be of the same form as a standard OpenSSH
> + The file at the given URL should be of the same form as a standard SSH
> authorized_keys file.
Same changes suggested than above
>
> Template: network-console/authorized_keys_fetch_failure
> Type: error
> # :sl6:
> -_Description: Could not fetch OpenSSH authorized keys
> - An error occurred while fetching OpenSSH authorized keys from ${LOCATION}.
> +_Description: Could not fetch SSH authorized keys
> + An error occurred while fetching SSH authorized keys from ${LOCATION}.
> .
> Check /var/log/syslog or see virtual console 4 for the details.
Ditto.
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