Quoting Manoj Srivastava (srivasta@ieee.org): > Description: A minimal, (currently non-graphical) core operating environment > This is the subset of Debian installed by default, which can be added > upon to provide a more featureful and tailored operating system. I like that one, with three minor glitches: -leading article, which goes against most of the recommendations for synopsis (for instance, in package descritpions) - 'currently' which puts an hypothetical moment where that one could be graphical, which is speculation. Removing it does not really remove information and mat shorten the description enough - adding a comma after 'Debian', as pointed by Praveen That would lead to: Description: Minimal (non-graphical) core operating environment This is the subset of Debian, installed by default, which can be added upon to provide a more featureful and tailored operating system.
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