Re: Bug#452388: "Standard system" is confusing

["Praveen A" <pravi.a@gmail.com>]

2007/11/25, Manoj Srivastava <srivasta@ieee.org>:
>
>  Description: A minimal, (currently non-graphical) core operating environment
>   This is the subset of Debian installed by default, which can be added
>    upon to provide a more featureful and tailored operating system.

Does adding a coma after Debian makes it clearer?

This is the subset of Debian, installed by default, which can be added
upon to provide a more featureful and tailored operating system.

or

This is the subset of Debian, installed by default, which provides
basic functionality. Packages can be added later to make it more
featureful and tailored system.

Cheers
Praveen
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