Re: Bug#265900: marked as done (does not support root on software raid)
Quoting Debian Bug Tracking System (owner@bugs.debian.org):
> Your message dated Fri, 08 Jul 2005 09:33:41 -0400
> with message-id <E1Dqsz7-0004M1-00@newraff.debian.org>
> and subject line Bug#265900: fixed in lilo-installer 1.11
> has caused the attached Bug report to be marked as done.
> * Patch from Eugeniy Meshcheryako to add raid-extra-boot=mbr-only
> to lilo.conf for software raid (Closes: #281724) and to add a new, working
> menu for raid (Closes: #265900)
This patch introduces a new string which I'm not completely
comfortable with:
The LILO program needs to be installed to make your new Debian system
bootable. You may choose to install it onto software RAID array or onto
other device.
The first sentence is common with other lilo-installer templates and I
propose to remove the "Debian" word here to avoid needed branding to
derived distributions ("make your new system bootable" seems pretty
acceptable to me).
The second sentence is probably missing an article : onto *a* software
RAID array. We can also probably avoid the repetition of "onto".
Native speakers?
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