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Bug#219189: marked as done (cdrom-checker: Debconf templates polishing)



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Subject: cdrom-checker: Debconf templates polishing
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Package: cdrom-checker
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

As usual, please consider all modifications as suggestions....this is part
of the general work on debconf templates "polishing" operation.

Rationale (native English speakers, PLEASE read and correct if needed):

 Template: cdrom-checker/start
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: CD-ROM integrity check
- Warning: this check depends on your hardware and may take some time. Are you
- sure that you want to continue?
+_Description: Check CD-ROM integrity?
+ Warning: this check depends on your hardware and may take some time.

Boolean template-->question on short description
Then avoid repeating the question in extended description. I see no real
need for insisting on "Are you sure"...

 Template: cdrom-checker/askmount
 Type: note
 _Description: Insert a Debian CD-ROM
- Please insert one of the official Debian CD-ROMs into the drive and press
- ENTER to continue.
+ Please insert one of the official Debian CD-ROMs into the drive 
+ before continuing.

No reference to specific user action (moreover, depending on keyboard
models, the "Enter" key is labeled as such ...or not).

 Template: cdrom-checker/mntfailed
-Type: note
+Type: error
 _Description: Failed to mount CD-ROM
  The CD-ROM ${CDROM} could not be mounted correctly. Please check the media
  and cables, and try it again.

Error-->template type=error

 Template: cdrom-checker/wrongcd
-Type: note
-_Description: No valid debian CD-ROM
- The CD-ROM you have inserted isn't a valid Debian CD-ROM. Please change the disk.
+Type: error
+_Description: No valid Debian CD-ROM
+ The CD-ROM you have inserted is not a valid Debian CD-ROM. 
+ Please change the disk.

Ditto.
Debian properly spelled
s/isn't/is not

 Template: cdrom-checker/md5file_failed
-Type: note
-_Description: Failed to open MD5 file
- Failed to open the MD5 file, which contains the checksums of the files
- located on the CD-ROM.
+Type: error
+_Description: Failed to open checksum file
+ Opening the MD5 file on the CD-ROM failed. This file contains the checksums
+ of the files located on the CD-ROM.

Error: ditto
Short description : less jargon
Extended description : make a real sentence (is it good English?)


 Template: cdrom-checker/passed
 Type: note
-_Description: Integrity test successful!
- The integrity for the CD-ROM was successful. The CD-ROM looks good!
+_Description: Integrity test successful
+ The integrity for the CD-ROM was successful. The CD-ROM looks correct.

Just facts. The check was successful, not need for yelling, this should be
normal after all..:-)

Looks good vs. looks correct : sounds better to me, but I may be wrong. I
want to avoid "trivial" language.

 Template: cdrom-checker/mismatch
-Type: note
-_Description: Integrity test failed!
- The following file has a md5sum mismatch: ${FILE}. Your CD-ROM or
+Type: error
+_Description: Integrity test failed
+ The ${FILE} file failed the MD5 checkum verification. Your CD-ROM or
  this file may be corrupt.

Error again
No yelling again, just facts..:)
The extended description is reworded. But I'm not sure about
"verification"....probably too french..:-)

"corrupt" or "corrupted"??


 Template: cdrom-checker/nextcd
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Test another CD-ROM
- Would you like to test another CD-ROM?
+_Description: Check another CD-ROM integrity?

We always "checked" the CD-ROM, so let's continue....Extended description is
just repeating the short one, so let's drop it.


 Template: cdrom-checker/firstcd
 Type: note
@@ -62,4 +61,4 @@
 Template: debian-installer/cdrom-checker/title
 Type: text
 #  Main menu item
-_Description: Verify the cd contents
+_Description: Check the CD-ROM(s) integrity


"Check" is used internally, so use it in the Main Menu entry also.
Same for "CD-ROM" and "integrity" (the latter may be dropped...)

I also suggest adding "(s)" as we allow for checking several CD's.

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--- templates.ori	2003-11-04 22:48:39.000000000 +0100
+++ templates	2003-11-04 22:48:28.000000000 +0100
@@ -1,49 +1,48 @@
 Template: cdrom-checker/start
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: CD-ROM integrity check
- Warning: this check depends on your hardware and may take some time. Are you
- sure that you want to continue?
+_Description: Check CD-ROM integrity?
+ Warning: this check depends on your hardware and may take some time.
 
 Template: cdrom-checker/askmount
 Type: note
 _Description: Insert a Debian CD-ROM
- Please insert one of the official Debian CD-ROMs into the drive and press
- ENTER to continue.
+ Please insert one of the official Debian CD-ROMs into the drive 
+ before continuing.
 
 Template: cdrom-checker/mntfailed
-Type: note
+Type: error
 _Description: Failed to mount CD-ROM
  The CD-ROM ${CDROM} could not be mounted correctly. Please check the media
  and cables, and try it again.
 
 Template: cdrom-checker/wrongcd
-Type: note
-_Description: No valid debian CD-ROM
- The CD-ROM you have inserted isn't a valid Debian CD-ROM. Please change the disk.
+Type: error
+_Description: No valid Debian CD-ROM
+ The CD-ROM you have inserted is not a valid Debian CD-ROM. 
+ Please change the disk.
 
 Template: cdrom-checker/md5file_failed
-Type: note
-_Description: Failed to open MD5 file
- Failed to open the MD5 file, which contains the checksums of the files
- located on the CD-ROM.
+Type: error
+_Description: Failed to open checksum file
+ Opening the MD5 file on the CD-ROM failed. This file contains the checksums
+ of the files located on the CD-ROM.
 
 Template: cdrom-checker/passed
 Type: note
-_Description: Integrity test successful!
- The integrity for the CD-ROM was successful. The CD-ROM looks good!
+_Description: Integrity test successful
+ The integrity for the CD-ROM was successful. The CD-ROM looks correct.
 
 Template: cdrom-checker/mismatch
-Type: note
-_Description: Integrity test failed!
- The following file has a md5sum mismatch: ${FILE}. Your CD-ROM or
+Type: error
+_Description: Integrity test failed
+ The ${FILE} file failed the MD5 checkum verification. Your CD-ROM or
  this file may be corrupt.
 
 Template: cdrom-checker/nextcd
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Test another CD-ROM
- Would you like to test another CD-ROM?
+_Description: Check another CD-ROM integrity?
 
 Template: cdrom-checker/firstcd
 Type: note
@@ -62,4 +61,4 @@
 Template: debian-installer/cdrom-checker/title
 Type: text
 #  Main menu item
-_Description: Verify the cd contents
+_Description: Check the CD-ROM(s) integrity

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From: Thorsten Sauter <tsauter@debian.org>
To: 219189-close@bugs.debian.org
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Subject: Bug#219189: fixed in cdrom-checker 0.15
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Date: Mon, 10 Nov 2003 18:32:38 -0500
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Source: cdrom-checker
Source-Version: 0.15

We believe that the bug you reported is fixed in the latest version of
cdrom-checker, which is due to be installed in the Debian FTP archive:

cdrom-checker_0.15.dsc
  to pool/main/c/cdrom-checker/cdrom-checker_0.15.dsc
cdrom-checker_0.15.tar.gz
  to pool/main/c/cdrom-checker/cdrom-checker_0.15.tar.gz
cdrom-checker_0.15_i386.udeb
  to pool/main/c/cdrom-checker/cdrom-checker_0.15_i386.udeb



A summary of the changes between this version and the previous one is
attached.

Thank you for reporting the bug, which will now be closed.  If you
have further comments please address them to 219189@bugs.debian.org,
and the maintainer will reopen the bug report if appropriate.

Debian distribution maintenance software
pp.
Thorsten Sauter <tsauter@debian.org> (supplier of updated cdrom-checker package)

(This message was generated automatically at their request; if you
believe that there is a problem with it please contact the archive
administrators by mailing ftpmaster@debian.org)


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Format: 1.7
Date: Mon, 10 Nov 2003 15:05:09 +0100
Source: cdrom-checker
Binary: cdrom-checker
Architecture: source i386
Version: 0.15
Distribution: unstable
Urgency: low
Maintainer: Debian Install System Team <debian-boot@lists.debian.org>
Changed-By: Thorsten Sauter <tsauter@debian.org>
Description: 
 cdrom-checker - Verify the cd contents (udeb)
Closes: 213054 219189
Changes: 
 cdrom-checker (0.15) unstable; urgency=low
 .
   * Peter Mann
     - Initial Slovak translation (sk.po).
   * Petter Reinholdtsen
     - Add forgotten debian/cdrom-checker.postinst. (Closes: #213054)
   * Thorsten Sauter
     - Fix typo in cdrom-checker/mismatch template
     - Update my email adress in Uploaders fields
     - Do some templates polishing (Closes: #219189)
Files: 
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 5d42479ec8601dbcc32c985118ba4133 17319 debian-installer optional cdrom-checker_0.15.tar.gz
 b760b583887199cb3d37bace693f1f36 7664 debian-installer optional cdrom-checker_0.15_i386.udeb

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