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Re: Install manual organization



siward <siward.de.groot@hccnet.nl> writes:

> Hello Chris,
>   nice that youre working on docs,
>   i send you a few thoughts, hope you like them.
> 
> I think the document should start with chapter 0 : "Welcome to this
> document".
>   contents, warning about document problems, foreword, getting newest
> version,
>   indication of copyright of document and purpose of document could be
> (part of) this.
>   maybe some words about or from the authors ?

We cannot start with a chapter 0, the SGML formatting tools
(debiandoc-sgml) do not support this.

> Apart from this,
>   for a document containing section "getting debian",
>   chapter title "Welcome to Debian" seems slightly premature.

Explain, please.

> GNU/Linux : i think it should be Linux/GNU/X

No, it should not :)

> > 2 System Requirements
> 
> /snip
> 
> > delete ->  4.6 Partitioning Prior to Installation (we recommend using Debian partitioning tools)
> 
>   i really dont know, but, would defragmenting be advantageous ?

No, doesn't matter unless your resizing, and maybe not even then.


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