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Re: Bug#514009: Release notes: section about Braille displays in installing.dbk/installing.po

Quoting Samuel Thibault (samuel.thibault@ens-lyon.org):

> Here is a patch.

A few comments:

> +<section id="install-with-speech">
> +  <title>Install &debian; with a hardware speech synthesis</title>

I think that "device" is missing here and maybe "s/a/an"

> +
> +  <para>
> +    Support for hardware speech syntheses is enabled only along support for
> +    graphical installer.  You thus need to select the <computeroutput>Graphical
> +    install</computeroutput> entry in the boot menu.
> +  </para>

I think you want to say that speech synthesis is only available with
the graphical installer. The English sentence seems awkward to me. Justin?

> +
> +  <para>
> +    Hardware speech syntheses can not be automatically detected.  You thus need
> +    to append the <userinput>speakup.synth=driver</userinput> boot parameter
> +    to tell Speakup which driver it should use. <userinput>driver</userinput>
> +    should be replaced by the driver code for your device, see <ulink
> +    url="&url-speakup-driver-codes;"></ulink> for a list.  The textual version
> +    of the installer will then be automatically selected, and support for the
> +    speech synthesis will be automatically installed on the target system.
> +  </para>
> +
>  </section>

Strange. You first say that speech synthesis is only aval with the
graphical installer, then that specifying what driver to use
automatically selects the *text* installer.

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