also sprach Philipp Kaluza (Debian Consulting) <debian@ghostroute.eu> [2014-04-23 00:25 +0200]:
> Overall, looks pretty awesome, and certainly like an association I'd
> like to be part of. :-)
\o/ ;)
> * In "jegliche, geschlechtsbasierende Diskriminierung", loose the comma.
> * "des Vereinszweck" needs a tailing "s"
Done.
> * The document is not gendered completely, I especially found §6b,
> §6d6-8 notable. Might have been easier to put a "male gender
> covers both" into the preamble, but I'm not sure if this is
> legally possible or we want that.
Done. Since we do say specifically that our purpose includes the
furthering of equal chances for all genders, we should not shortcut
here, I think.
> * There is no mention on how to close a ressort again, or if it
> can close itself.
"Ein Ressort wird geschlossen, wenn die Aufgaben für die es
eingerichtet wurde erledigt sind, oder wenn der Vorstand dies
beschließt. Dies ist mit einem Endbericht des Ressortleiters bzw.\
des Vorstands zu protokollieren. Etwaige Vollmachten sind sofort
zurückzugeben." ?
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