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Re: [Debconf-team] DebConf15 Thank you ad.



Changes made. Not sure how I missed those horrible typos!

Any suggestions for the 'Looking forward to next year' portion? I'm not
very happy with it but thought something needed to be there.


On 11/12/2015 02:58 AM, Daniel Lange wrote:
> Am 11.11.2015 um 23:14 schrieb Donald Norwood:
>> http://debconf-data.alioth.debian.org/tmp/
>>
>> Please be vocal and let us know of the 3 which you would prefer (and
>> what changes should be made).
>
> Great, thank you very much for putting work into this!
>
> I like ad5 best because it includes the DC16 info.
>
> Text:
>  "Devian" -> "Debian"
>  remove comma before "which"
>  "all of your sponsors" -> "all of our sponsors"
>
> I'd probably remove the "To them we say:". This line is not necessary.
>
> I'd ad the DC16 logo and probably make the lower part of the ad (the
> DC16 piece) visually similar to the
> mail graphical element on http://debconf16.debconf.org/ .
> Tammy Manning (Tamo) could supply you a svg to include if you like
> this idea.


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