Hi Tammy
I've reworked the paragraph text, how does this work for you?
I've also removed the links from the action points - we should rather
work them into the website, so people have one point to go to.
DebConf is the annual conference for Debian contributors and users
interested in improving the Debian project, one of the largest Free
Software projects worldwide. The Debian Project is an association of
volunteer individuals who have made common cause to create an
operating system comprised entirely of Free Software.
Once a year they gather and concentrate on the development and
improvement of the Debian distribution. DebConf is a combination of
concurrent scheduled talks, plenaries, development sprints, hacking
time and ad-hoc meetings and sessions. In 2016, DebConf will be hosted
in Cape Town, South Africa, for the first time.
Get involved!
* Learn more about Debian
* Join us at Debian Day, open to the public
* Watch past talks
* Exhibit at the Information Art expo during DebConf
* Participate in the ShowMeBox
* Sponsor! Contact sponsors@debconf.org for assistance
DebConf is organized solely by volunteers and a fair amount of
attendees are subsidised to attend, from across the globe, thanks to
generous support. Our sponsorship levels and some of the perks
associated with them are:
The flyer text still lives here: http://deb.li/flyer16
There is also feedback on the brochure on that page. I've also copied
this to the titanpad for ease of reference.
(https://titanpad.com/DC16-sponsorship-brochure-tiny-issues)
regards
B
On Thu, Nov 5, 2015 at 9:36 PM, Michael Banck <mbanck@debian.org> wrote:
> Hi Tammy,
>
> On Wed, Nov 04, 2015 at 04:23:51PM +0000, Tammy via Dropbox wrote:
>> Please see the Flyer: the Flyer PDF is 3 Options of layout, and the
>> Inkscape Options are added separately but are large files. Still to be
>> added are Options 2 and Options 3 in the Inkscape format.
>
> Wow, great!
>
>> Some of the info doesn't fit due to the table taking up most of the
>> space but on the Landscape option I can get more in.
>
> I looked at the PDF version, and there's something weird going on with
> the table: row 7 is empty, and the text of the left-most column has lots
> of padding on the right. Was row 7 too long? Maybe it can be rephrased
> then.
>
> But that's the only obvious issue I saw at first glance, it's looking
> great otherwise IMO.
>
>
> Michael
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