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Re: [Debconf-team] Sponsorpack Draft

-=| Pablo Duboue, Wed, Jan 20, 2010 at 02:57:46AM -0500 |=-
> A draft for the sponsor pack is in SVN:
> http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/debconf-data/dc10/sponsors/sponsorpack_no_photos.pdf

Great work!

Some random notes:

* page 5: aren't the sponsor levels lower margins to be included? It 
  currently says
  any   > $2,500 >$10,000  >$25,000  >$40,000

  Shouldn't these be ">="? (plus a space before the dollar sign 

* page 6 says "We have secured lodging for $63 a night and food for 
  $15 a day.". I seem to recall $15 was per meal. Maybe I just 
  confused things.

* the main text body seems to overlap with the footer on the last two 

* title page: maybe replace "Sponsorship package" with "Information 
  for sponsors"? I am not a native speaker so maybe I am just not uset 
  to the kind of language one uses when takling to sponsors :)

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