Re: donations website: Debian France
On Wed, 29 Oct 2014, Holger Wansing wrote:
> > Feel free to rephrase anything that is unclear or ambiguous.
>
> So, would you feel comfortable with the following patch?
Looks OK for me. Except "is aN organization" (you need to add the "n" I
put in captial otherwise it's not good). But maybe the opinion of a native
english speaker would be better...
> <p>
> The <a href="https://france.debian.net/";>Debian France Association</a> is a
> -1901 registered organisation in France founded to support and promote the
> +organisation registered in France under the <q>law of 1901</q>,
> +founded to support and promote the
> Debian Project in France.
> </p>
Cheers,
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