Bug#370425: installation-guide
Package: installation-guide
Version:
Severity: minor
Tags: l10n, patch
From partitioning.po
Most of them are formatting inconsistencies, but there are a few
typos. Also, sizes are written inconsistently:
20GB
20 GB
20MB
20 MB
20kb
20k
20KB
We should probably choose one format and stick to it.
1.
po:14
auto: ⑤ Tag: filename
Original: ⌘0 boot
- boot
+ <filename>boot</filename>
iff you want to use that formatting for all the directories in the
table. If so, there are quite a few which don't yet have it.
2.
po:88
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 Be careful if you have existing FreeBSD partitions on
your machine. The installation kernels include support for these
partitions, but the way that <command>fdisk</command> represents them
(or not) can make the device names differ. See the <ulink url=\"&url-
linux-freebsd;\">Linux+FreeBSD HOWTO</ulink>
Missing final full stop.
- HOWTO</ulink>
+ HOWTO</ulink>.
3.
po:106
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 Booting Debian from the SRM console (the only disk boot
method supported by &releasename;) requires you to have a BSD disk
label, not a DOS partition table, on your boot disk. (Remember, the
SRM boot block is incompatible with MS-DOS partition tables —
see <xref linkend=\"alpha-firmware\"/>.) As a result,
<command>partman</command> creates BSD disk labels when running on
&architecture;, but if your disk has an existing DOS partition table
the existing partitions will need to be deleted before partman can
convert it to use a disk label.
- before partman can
+ before <command>partman</command> can
4.
po:112
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 If you have an existing other operating system such as
DOS or Windows and you want to preserve that operating system while
installing Debian, you may need to resize its partition to free up
space for the Debian installation. The installer supports resizing of
both FAT and NTFS filesystems; when you get to the installer's
partitioning step, select the option to partition manually and then
simply select an existing partition and change its size.
- select the option to partition manually
+ select the option <guimenuitem>Manually edit partition table</
guimenuitem>
5.
po:120
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 The <command>partman</command> disk partitioner is the
default partitioning tool for the installer. It manages the set of
partitions and their mount points to ensure that the disks and
filesystems is properly configured for a successful installation. It
actually uses the <command>parted</command> to do the on-disk
partitioning.
- the disks and filesystems is properly configured
+ the disks and filesystems are properly configured
- uses the <command>parted</command>
+ uses <command>parted</command>
OR
+ uses the <command>parted</command> program
[Grammar note: you don't use an article (the, a) with a name on its
own.]
6.
po:122
auto: ⑤ Tag: para
Original: ⌘0 The IA64 EFI firmware supports two partition table (or
disk label) formats, GPT and MS-DOS. MS-DOS, the format typically
used on i386 PCs, is no longer recommended for IA64 systems. Although
the installer also provides the <command>cfdisk</command>, you should
only use the <ulink url=\"parted.txt\"> <command>parted</command></
ulink> because only it can manage both GPT and MS-DOS tables correctly.
- provides the <command>cfdisk</command>,
+ provides <command>cfdisk</command>,
OR
+ provides the <command>cfdisk</command> program,
- use the <ulink url=\"parted.txt\"> <command>parted</command></ulink>
+ use <ulink url=\"parted.txt\"> <command>parted</command></ulink>
OR
+ use the <ulink url=\"parted.txt\"> <command>parted</command></
ulink> program
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