Bug#1098237: Xsession.options.d.5: Some remarks and a patch with editorial changes for this man page
Package: x11-common
Version: 1:7.7+24
Severity: minor
Tags: patch
* What led up to the situation?
Checking for defects with a new version
test-[g|n]roff -mandoc -t -K utf8 -rF0 -rHY=0 -rCHECKSTYLE=10 -ww -z < "man page"
[Use "groff -e ' $' -e '\\~$' <file>" to find obvious trailing spaces.]
["test-groff" is a script in the repository for "groff"; is not shipped]
(local copy and "troff" slightly changed by me).
[The fate of "test-nroff" was decided in groff bug #55941.]
* What was the outcome of this action?
an.tmac:<stdin>:78: misuse, warning: .BR is for at least 2 arguments, got 1
Use macro '.B' for one argument or split argument.
* What outcome did you expect instead?
No output (no warnings).
-.-
General remarks and further material, if a diff-file exist, are in the
attachments.
-- System Information:
Debian Release: trixie/sid
APT prefers testing
APT policy: (500, 'testing')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)
Kernel: Linux 6.12.12-amd64 (SMP w/2 CPU threads; PREEMPT)
Locale: LANG=is_IS.iso88591, LC_CTYPE=is_IS.iso88591 (charmap=ISO-8859-1), LANGUAGE not set
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /usr/bin/dash
Init: sysvinit (via /sbin/init)
Versions of packages x11-common depends on:
ii lsb-base 11.6
ii sysvinit-utils [lsb-base] 3.14-1
x11-common recommends no packages.
x11-common suggests no packages.
-- no debconf information
Input file is Xsession.options.d.5
Output from "mandoc -T lint Xsession.options.d.5": (shortened list)
-.-.
Output from "test-groff -mandoc -t -ww -z Xsession.options.d.5": (shortened list)
1 Use macro '.B' for one argument or split argument.
1 .BR is for at least 2 arguments, got 1
-.-.
Put a parenthetical sentence, phrase on a separate line,
if not part of a code.
See man-pages(7), item "semantic newline".
Xsession.options.d.5:44:an option (with or without the \(oqno\-\(cq prefix) take precedence over earlier
-.-.
FSF office address update. See
https://lists.gnu.org/archive/html/bug-gnulib/2024-09/msg00004.html
18:.\" Suite 330, Boston, MA 02111-1307 USA
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Remove quotes when there is a printable
but no space character between them
and the quotes are not for emphasis (markup),
for example as an argument to a macro.
19:.TH Xsession.options 5 "2004\-10\-31" "Debian Project"
-.-.
Output from "test-groff -mandoc -t -K utf8 -rF0 -rHY=0 -rCHECKSTYLE=10 -ww -z ":
an.tmac:<stdin>:78: misuse, warning: .BR is for at least 2 arguments, got 1
Use macro '.B' for one argument or split argument.
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Generally:
Split (sometimes) lines after a punctuation mark; before a conjunction.
--- Xsession.options.d.5 2025-02-18 07:42:15.604901784 +0000
+++ Xsession.options.d.5.new 2025-02-18 07:56:54.039562977 +0000
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
.\" the Debian operating system, in /usr/share/common-licenses/GPL; if
.\" not, write to the Free Software Foundation, Inc., 59 Temple Place,
.\" Suite 330, Boston, MA 02111-1307 USA
-.TH Xsession.options 5 "2004\-10\-31" "Debian Project"
+.TH Xsession.options 5 2004\-10\-31 "Debian Project"
.SH NAME
Xsession.options, Xsession.options.d \- configuration options for
.BR Xsession (5)
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ assumed to be a Bourne shell script, and
.TP
.B use-session-dbus
If the
-.BR dbus
+.B dbus
package is installed, the session bus will be activated at X session
launch.
.TP
Any program (person), that produces man pages, should check the output
for defects by using (both groff and nroff)
[gn]roff -mandoc -t -ww -b -z -K utf8 <man page>
The same goes for man pages that are used as an input.
For a style guide use
mandoc -T lint
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Any "autogenerator" should check its products with the above mentioned
'groff', 'mandoc', and additionally with 'nroff ...'.
It should also check its input files for too long (> 80) lines.
This is just a simple quality control measure.
The "autogenerator" may have to be corrected to get a better man page,
the source file may, and any additional file may.
Common defects:
Not removing trailing spaces (in in- and output).
The reason for these trailing spaces should be found and eliminated.
"git" has a "tool" to point out whitespace,
see for example "git-apply(1)" and git-config(1)")
Not beginning each input sentence on a new line.
Line length and patch size should thus be reduced.
The script "reportbug" uses 'quoted-printable' encoding when a line is
longer than 1024 characters in an 'ascii' file.
See man-pages(7), item "semantic newline".
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The difference between the formatted output of the original and patched file
can be seen with:
nroff -mandoc <file1> > <out1>
nroff -mandoc <file2> > <out2>
diff -d -u <out1> <out2>
and for groff, using
\"printf '%s\n%s\n' '.kern 0' '.ss 12 0' | groff -mandoc -Z - \"
instead of 'nroff -mandoc'
Add the option '-t', if the file contains a table.
Read the output from 'diff -d -u ...' with 'less -R' or similar.
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If 'man' (man-db) is used to check the manual for warnings,
the following must be set:
The option \"-warnings=w\"
The environmental variable:
export MAN_KEEP_STDERR=yes (or any non-empty value)
or
(produce only warnings):
export MANROFFOPT=\"-ww -b -z\"
export MAN_KEEP_STDERR=yes (or any non-empty value)
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