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Bug#819664: Re-organise the CD / download pages to make them more useful



Hi

El 17/07/16 a las 18:03, Steve McIntyre escribió:
> Hey Laura,
> 
> On Thu, Mar 31, 2016 at 08:14:59PM +0200, Laura Arjona Reina wrote:
>> El 31/03/16 a las 19:09, Steve McIntyre escribió:
> 
> ...
> 
>>>
>>>  * Replace that link with a link to a simple "Download" page which
>>>    gives *simple* instructions and links. This would be similar to
>>>    what we have at https://www.debian.org/distrib/ , but we also need
>>>    to re-org that page and make it prettier and clearer, add some
>>>    graphics etc.:
> 
> ...
> 
>>> Thoughts?
>>>
>> I like this proposal very much, and I'll put time to make it happen, if
>> others like it too.
> 
> It's been a while, and I'd like to move on with this. Do you have the
> time to help, please?
> 

I have created a CVS branch called new_download in the english folder
of the CVS repo to work on this.

In that branch, I have created a "download" folder under the "english"
folder with a Makefile and index.wml

I'm attaching the index.wml in its current state to this email for
people to be able to review it without checking out the whole branch.

It still needs work in the last 3 steps (verify, write to usb, write
to cd).

For what I have read, you can checkout, update and work in the branch
just adding "-r new_download" to your cvs commands.

I'll go on working on this, and try to reuse the wording of the
current pages, inserting comments to translators, so when the page is
complete, translations are easy to do.

When more or less the text is ready, I'll try to get -l10n-english and
-designers in the loop for improving the page, and I'll go on working
on the subsequent pages (same strategy: get the text trying to reuse
from the current pages, etc).

Finally, if we agree to put in production this, we should need to
* change the homepage so the "Download Debian" button points to this,
* probably remove paragraphs or whole pages under /CD or /distrib, or
rewrite them
* get the corresponding redirects in Apache where needed (if we remove
some pages, redirect to the new ones, etc).

Please let me know your ideas or if I'm understanding or doing
something wrong (or it can be improved in some way).

Cheers

-- 
Laura Arjona Reina
https://wiki.debian.org/LauraArjona
#use wml::debian::template title="Getting Debian"
#include "$(ENGLISHDIR)/releases/images.data"

# Note for translators: these paragraph are taken from www.d.o/index

<p><a href="https://www.debian.org/";>Debian</a> is a
<a href="intro/free">free</a> operating system (OS) for your computer.
An operating system is the set of basic programs and utilities that make
your computer run.
</p>

<p>Debian provides more than a pure OS: it comes with over
<packages_in_stable> <a href="distrib/packages">packages</a>, precompiled software bundled
up in a nice format for easy installation on your machine. <a href="intro/about">Read more...</a></p>
</div>

# Note for translators: these paragraphs are taken from www.d.o/distrib/index

<p>Debian is distributed <a href="../intro/free">freely</a>
over Internet. You can download all of it from any of our
<a href="ftplist">mirrors</a>.
The <a href="../releases/stable/installmanual">Installation Manual</a>
contains detailed installation instructions.
</p>

<div class="line">
  <div class="item col50">
  # new rewording and reorganization
  
    ## a fancy image for installer should be here
       
    # these are taken from www.d.o/distrib/index
 
   <h2><a href="netinst">Download an installation image</a></h2>
    
    <p>A <a href="netinst"><strong>small installation image</strong></a>
        can be downloaded quickly and should be recorded onto a removable
        disk. </p>
        
    <ul class="quicklist downlist">
      <li><a title="Download installer for 64-bit Intel and AMD PC"
             href="<stable-images-url/>/amd64/iso-cd/debian-<current-tiny-cd-release-filename/>-amd64-netinst.iso">64-bit
          PC netinst iso</a></li>
      <li><a title="Download installer for normal 32-bit Intel and AMD PC"
         href="<stable-images-url/>/i386/iso-cd/debian-<current-tiny-cd-release-filename/>-i386-netinst.iso">32-bit
         PC netinst iso</a></li>
    
    # this one is new
    
      <li><a title="Not sure which one to choose? Download a installer valid for both 32 and 64 bits"
             href="<stable-images-url/>/multi-arch/iso-cd/debian-<current-tiny-cd-release-filename/>-amd64-i386-netinst.iso">
            Not sure which one to choose? Download a installer valid for both 32 and 64 bits</a></li>
      
      <li><a title="" href="">More...</a></li>
    </ul>
  </div>
  

  <div class="item col50 lastcol">
  
    # new rewording and reorganization
  
    ## a fancy image for desktop should be here

    <h2><a href="../CD/live/">Try Debian live before installing</a></h2>
    <p>
      You can try Debian by booting a live system from a CD, DVD or USB key
      without installing any files to the computer. When you are ready, you can
      run the included installer. 
    </p>
    <ul class="quicklist downlist">
      <li><a title="Download live torrents for 64-bit Intel and AMD PC"
	     href="<live-images-url/>/amd64/bt-hybrid/">64-bit PC live torrents</a></li>
      <li><a title="Download live torrents for normal 32-bit Intel and AMD PC"
	     href="<live-images-url/>/i386/bt-hybrid/">32-bit PC live torrents</a></li>
      <li>
      More <a href="../CD/live">information about Debian Live</a>...
    </ul>
  </div>
</div>



<div class="line">

### this column needs to be centered

  <div class="item col50">
  
  # here a fancy graphic about checksums / padlock etc.

    <h2><a href="">Verify your download</a></h2>

   <p>
                   (simple rationale and instructions,
                         link to page with more details)
   </p>
   </div>
</div>

<div class="line">
  <div class="item col50">
 
    ## a fancy image for USB stick
       
 
   <h2>How to write to USB</h2>
    
    <p>(simple instructions,
         link to pages with more
     details)   </p>
        
  </div>
  
  <div class="item col50 lastcol">
  
   ## a fancy picture of CD/DVD media
       
 
   <h2>How to write to optical media</h2>
    
    <p>(simple instructions,
         link to pages with more
     details)   </p>
        
  </div>
  
  </div>





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