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Re: DSA 1184 corrections



On Mon, Oct 02, 2006 at 07:55:23PM +0200, Jens Seidel wrote:
> I applied the following patch to CVS and hope I did it right. But I have
> one problem understanding the text:
...
>  update for the Linux 2.6.8 kernel that was missing due to technical
>  problems. For reference below please see the original advisory text.</p>
> 
> Please explain "For reference below".
> 
> Maybe: "For references to the text below " or just "For reference "?

I think it should be "For reference, please see the text of the
original advisory:".

-- 
Matt



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