Re: Error on Debian Webpage

[MJ Ray <mjr@phonecoop.coop>]

Cai Qian <caiqian@debian.org> wrote:
> (http://www.debian.org/News/2006/20060719), it said,
> >The Kingdom of Bhutan is a landlocked South Asian nation situated
> >between India, Tibet and China and is often described as the last
> >surviving traditional Himalayan Buddhist culture.
> 
> I believe this sentence is questionable, because of "Tibet and China" is
> grammarly incorrect. Please correct it in the website.

I cannot see a grammatical _error_ in the above paragraph,
but a repeated "and" is sometimes considered bad style, so
s/ and is/.  It is/ if you want.  Any other ideas?

Thanks,
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