Re: suggested change to w.d.o/distrib/floppyinst page
On Mon, Sep 01, 2003 at 01:39:07PM +0200, Giuseppe Sacco wrote:
> --- floppyinst.wml.orig 2002-08-26 00:32:38.000000000 +0200
> +++ floppyinst.wml 2003-09-01 13:35:54.000000000 +0200
> @@ -22,11 +22,19 @@
> <a href="$(HOME)/releases/stable/i386/ch-rescue-boot#s-boot-from-floppies">\
> installation manual</a>.
> </li>
> - <li>When the installation process prompts you for the files, choose the
> - "Network" method in order to connect to a Debian mirror to fetch the
> - files from, as the
> + <li>At the "boot:" prompt, press enter, and follow the installation
> + instructions in the installation manual.
Add a link to the right section, perhaps?
> + <li>When the installation process prompts you to choose between CD/Hard
> + Disk/Network/Floppy media, choose "Network".
I'd replace the second "choose" with "select".
> + <li>Connect to a Debian mirror and download the installation files, as
> + described in the installation manual, at
> <a href="$(HOME)/releases/stable/i386/ch-install-system#s-install-os-netfetch">\
> - installation manual</a> also explains.
> + this chapter</a>.
"at this chapter" sounds wrong. "as described in [this chapter of the
installation manual]."?
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