Re: Bug#154904: Mini-CD page text is unclear.

[Richard Atterer <deb-www@list02.atterer.net>]

On Wed, Jul 31, 2002 at 03:29:14PM -0600, Sean Reifschneider wrote:
> Is there anything that you find particularly unclear or missing
> about my re-wording of either of the sample alternatives I've
> provided?

No, thanks. I've changed the text like this:

    <p>Note: There are currently no official net install/mini-CD
    images available.</p>
    
    <p>The network install assumes that you have a connection to the
    Internet either using analogue PPP dial-up or using an ethernet
    connection. This may be through a PCMCIA adapter on laptops. 
    Internal (PCI) ISDN cards are not supported - sorry!</p>
    
    <p>The following unofficial net install images are available:</p>

This is basically what you proposed, I just replaced "ISP connection"
with "internet connection".

Cheers,

  Richard

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