Re: Bug#71991: www.debian.org: Swedish translation of security page -- unidiomatic phrasing

[peter karlsson <peter@softwolves.pp.se>]

era eriksson:

> May I humbly suggest the following changes to the
> http://www.debian.org/security/index.sv.html

Thank you. I'm incorporating some of your changes, but some deviate too far
from the original text to be called translations, so I'm not including
those. However, I've reworded all the paragraphs you wrote about, since I
can see that the translation isn't always that good :-)

Say, we could use a little help on the Swedish translation team, want to
join us?

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