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Re: The partners page

On Wed, Jun 21, 2000 at 08:35:45PM +0200, peter karlsson wrote:
>  From the description of rebel.com:
> >This combination of hardware, integrated open source software, size,
> >ultra-low power consumption and reliability make this the product of choice
> >for cost-sensitive development projects.
> I think that needs rewording, I don't think we really mean to implicate that
> they have ultra-low reliability... =8)
Very few native speakers would interpret it as you did. Changing the
second line to:
> >reliability and ultra-low power consumption make this the product of choice
should remove any chance of misinterpretation.

James (Jay) Treacy

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