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Bug#475719: ITP: robotfactory -- Help Pedro to build robots in his factory (game)



On 12-Apr-08, 09:01 (CDT), Juanjo Conti <jjconti@gmail.com> wrote: 
> * Package name : robotfactory
> Version : 1.0
> Upstream Author : 10 Roboticists from Santa Fe  
> <pyweek@lists.firebirds.com.ar>
> * URL : http://code.google.com/p/pyweek6
> * License : GPL
> Description : Help Pedro to build robots in his factory (game)

Don't really need the trailing "(game)", since it will presumably be in
the "games" section of the archive.

>  robotfactory is a game in which you have to use your mouse to pick up  

Should be "Robotfactory is a game...". (Yes, I know that the actual
program is "robotfactory". None-the-less, in English, the first word of
a sentence is always capitalized.)

Also, the whole long description is misformated - every line should
begin with a space. 

Steve

-- 
Steve Greenland
    The irony is that Bill Gates claims to be making a stable operating
    system and Linus Torvalds claims to be trying to take over the
    world.       -- seen on the net



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