Quoting Alexander Schmehl (tolimar@debian.org): > Package: wnpp > Severity: wishlist > Owner: Alexander Schmehl <tolimar@debian.org> > > > * Package name : extreme-tuxracer > Version : 0.4.0 > Upstream Author : Pawel Drewniak, Guillaume Martres and others > * URL : http://www.extremetuxracer.com/ > * License : GPL (mostly) > Programming Lang: C++ > Description : Arcade game featuring tux the penguin, snow ice and fishes At least uncapitalize "Arcade". > > Extreme Tuxracer, or etracer as it is called for short, is a simple OpenGL > racing game featuring Tux, the Linux mascot. The goal of the game is to slide > down a snow- and ice-covered mountain as quickly as possible, avoiding the > trees and rocks that will slow you down. > . > Collect herrings and other goodies while sliding down the hill, but avoid fish > bones. > . > This game is based on the GPL version of the famous game TuxRacer. > . > You should have working 3D acceleration for your X or this game will run quite > slow. I refrain my "neutral wording" stance here which makes me think that wording with "you should have", "you must", etc. should be dropped in favor of "<foo> is required".....I guess that contradictors will object that some "friendly" wording is OK for games. However, shouldn't the last word be "slowly"?
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