Bug#434525: ITP: swing-layout -- Extensions to Swing layout

[Steve Greenland <steveg@moregruel.net>]

On 24-Jul-07, 11:09 (CDT), Michael Koch <konqueror@gmx.de> wrote: 
> Package: wnpp
> Severity: wishlist
> Owner: Michael Koch <konqueror@gmx.de>
> 
> 
> * Package name    : swing-layout
>   Version         : 1.0.2
>   Upstream Author : SUN Microsystems, Inc.
> * URL             : http://swing-layout.dev.java.net
> * License         : LGPL
>   Programming Lang: Java
>   Description     : swing-layout - Extensions to Swing layout

Don't put the package name in the short description:

Description: extensions to Swing layout.

> 
> Swing Layout Extensions goal is to make it easy to create professional

To avoid an awkward apostrophe ("Swing Layout Extensions' goal..."), this
might better be phrased as "The goal of Swing Layout Extensions is...").

> cross platform layouts with Swing. This project has an eye towards the
> needs of GUI builders, such as NetBeans. This project consists of the
> following pieces:

"This package provides the following functionality:"

Regards,
Steve

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Steve Greenland
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