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*	From: Camale&#xF3;n <noelamac@gmail.com>
*	Date: Fri, 14 Oct 2011 17:22:00 +0000 (UTC)
> - Keep the uppercase for the first word in all of the points. Now some of 
> the points start with uppercase and others with lowercase, this needs to 
> be normalized :-)

Worked over about 3/4 of the text where that applies.  Tried to 
improve, grammar, style and flow of concepts including use of 
lower and upper case.  Better?  Worse?

Will continue with the improvements you suggested as time is 
available.

Regards,               ... Peter E.


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