Re: Bug#145478: problems with multido.doc on CTAN

[Richard Lewis <debian@rtf.org.uk>]

Hilmar Preusse <hille42@web.de> writes:

> old:
> Description: teTeX texmf source files
>  This is teTeX (version 1.0), a TeX distribution for UNIX compatible
>  systems.
>  .
>  Source files for the texmf tree of the Debian teTeX distribution.
>  They are only here to meet the copyright requirements of some
>  tex packages.
>  .
>  You don't need to install them to have a running TeX system.
>
> proposal:
> Description: teTeX texmf source tree
>  This is a part of teTeX, a TeX distribution for UNIX compatible
>  systems.
>  .
>  These are the source files for the texmf tree of the Debian teTeX
>  distribution. The license of some packages requires to ship the
                                                      ^
insert "us" here

>  source texmf-tree together with the texmf-tree. Hereby we're meeting
>  this copyright requirement.
>  .
>  You don't need to install that package to have a running teTeX
                             ^^^^

should be "this"

Or perhaps

"You don't need to install this package to have a working teTeX"

is better