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Bug#189343: tetex-doc: poor Description:



Atsuhito Kohda <kohda@pm.tokushima-u.ac.jp> writes:

> tetex-doc:
> Description: The documentation component of the Debian teTeX packages
>  This package contains all the documentation of (La)TeX-packages,
>  which are contained in tetex-base and tetex-extra.

<fussy mode>
In English, relative clauses aren't introduced by commas, so
change that to:
... documentation of (La)TeX-packages which are contained ...

>  There are
>  several FAQ's, the LaTeX Catalogue and some more documentation about
>  MetaPost, fonts, PSTricks, kpathsea, pdfTeX etc.
>  .
>  Whenever you wondered, why there is a big emptiness below

Rather:
If (or: In case) you wondered why ...
(but I'm still not sure whether this joke contributes anything
useful here).
</fussy mode>

Best,
Stefan



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