[snapshot/master] language fixes, thanks sgran
---
web/app/snapshot/templates/root.mako | 18 +++++++++---------
1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
diff --git a/web/app/snapshot/templates/root.mako b/web/app/snapshot/templates/root.mako
index d90f7bd..f6e6d25 100644
--- a/web/app/snapshot/templates/root.mako
+++ b/web/app/snapshot/templates/root.mako
@@ -64,20 +64,20 @@ hardware.
<h2>Usage</h2>
<p>
-In order to browse snapshots of the archives kept in snapshot.debian.org simply
+In order to browse snapshots of the archives kept on snapshot.debian.org, simply
follow the links on the top left. They will lead you to a list of months for
-which data was imported, and the list entries in turn will point you all
+which data was imported, and the list entries in turn will point you to all
timestamps of a given month's snapshots.
</p>
-<p>For example
+<p>For example,
<a href="/archive/debian/"><code>/archive/debian/</code></a>
shows that we have imports for the main Debian archive,
<a href="http://ftp.debian.org/debian/";><code>http://ftp.debian.org/debian/</code></a>,
-starting in 2005 up to today.
+from 2005 until the present.
Picking October of 2009,
<a href="/archive/debian/?year=2009;month=10"><code>/archive/debian/?year=2009;month=10</code></a>,
-provides us with a list of many different states of the debian archive, roughtly spaced 6 hours apart
+provides us with a list of many different states of the debian archive, roughly spaced 6 hours apart
(the update frequency of ftp.debian.org at that time).
Following any of these links, say
<a href="/archive/debian/20091004T111800Z/"><code>/archive/debian/20091004T111800Z/</code></a>,
@@ -85,8 +85,8 @@ shows how <code>ftp.debian.org/debian</code> looked on the 4th of October 2009 a
</p>
<p style="margin-top:2em;">
-In case you want to add a specific date's archive to your apt sources.list simply
-compose an entry like these:
+If you want to add a specific date's archive to your apt <code>sources.list</code> simply
+add an entry like these:
</p>
<pre>
deb <a href="/archive/debian/20091004T111800Z/">http://snapshot.debian.org/archive/debian/20091004T111800Z/</a> lenny main
@@ -98,8 +98,8 @@ deb-src <a href="/archive/debian-security/20091004T121501Z/">http://snapshot.deb
To learn which snapshots exist, i.e. which date strings are valid, simply
browse the list as mentioned above. Valid date formats are
<code>yyyymmddThhmmssZ</code> or simply <code>yyyymmdd</code>. If there
-is no import at the exact time you specified you will get latest
-availably timestamp which is before the time you specified.
+is no import at the exact time you specified you will get the latest
+available timestamp which is before the time you specified.
</p>
<p style="margin-top:2em;">
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