Bug#692767: unblock: cryptsetup/2:1.4.3-4
Control: tags -1 + confirmed d-i
On Sat, 2012-11-10 at 18:01 +0100, intrigeri wrote:
> Jonas Meurer wrote (08 Nov 2012 16:31:14 GMT) :
> > Only easy fixes, documentation and translation updates are included.
>
> I have reviewed the diff, and I agree the few proposed changes are
> easy ones, don't look risky to me, and fix annoying bugs. Thanks.
Ack; this would also need a d-i ack.
> Minor comments follow.
>
> > diff -Nru cryptsetup-1.4.3/debian/README.initramfs cryptsetup-1.4.3/debian/README.initramfs
> > --- cryptsetup-1.4.3/debian/README.initramfs 2012-03-10 02:06:31.000000000 +0100
> > +++ cryptsetup-1.4.3/debian/README.initramfs 2012-11-01 13:47:25.000000000 +0100
> [...]
> > +0. enter another system(like livecd)
> ^^
> Missing space
>
> > +1. luksOpen with the new name, change the target name to the new one
> > +2. chroot into it(now, the living target name is the same as it in
> ^^
> Missing space
"Living target name" also sounds slightly odd, imo.
I'd also s/bugreport/bug report/g and s/workaround/work around/ in the
introductory paragraph.
Regards,
Adam
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